New Script - Cambridge Portfolio Project

A lot of changes on  the script has been made in the opening, as I told before, I did not do it with my friends but my family. 

Now, the new and final version of the story, is me as the main character, receiving a pizza order from a guy. Everything seems normal, but a series of hints imply that this guy is not the normal guy he seems to be. 

My dad will play this person, and it will be located on a normal house. The shots will show my arrival to the house, and then the movie ends with this guy asking for help with stuff inside and the antagonist locking the door behind him. This will create the mistery towards what will happen next and make the people want to continue watching.

I had to come up with this idea due to obviously the issues I mentioned before, but also I think this version is the better one of all I did. I am really happy with the result and hope that everyone does too.